Room 10 Winton School

Wednesday, May 30, 2012

Beautiful Southland

If you ever take a moment to just sit and sigh you would notice Southlands beautiful morning sky. In Southland we are lucky enough to have amazing views of the takitimus the purple and red clouds and the astonishing rainbows. Here is a picture of some beautiful clouds hovering above the green hills full of fresh grass. 




So remember if you're ever feeling down just look up at the morning sky and sigh.


By Damen Axtens  
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  1. Room 10May 30, 2012 at 7:57 PM

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  2. Room 10May 30, 2012 at 7:58 PM

    Very nice story Damen! I like how you said that if you are ever feeling down just look up at the morning sky and sigh. The story even rhymed, and I like rhyming stories.

    Jane.D

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  3. Room 10May 31, 2012 at 9:37 AM

    Awesome Damen I like how you used where what who when I also loved how you used lost of rhyming words.

    TH

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  4. Room 10May 31, 2012 at 9:44 AM

    Great story Damen I loved how you took that picture and shared it with the class.I also liked how you made it rhyme and my favourite piece of the story was how you said if you're felling sad look at the morning sky and sigh.

    T.W

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  5. Room 10May 31, 2012 at 9:55 AM

    Awesome poem Damen I liked how you made it rhyme, and how you did it on something you liked about Southland! I liked the photo too, did you take it yourself? Great job!

    Charlotte Smith

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  6. Room 10June 5, 2012 at 6:16 PM

    Great work Damen it is a great idea that you made it rhyme like a poem. Fabulous idea doing a poem as we are learnig about poems in class, great way to show that you are listening in class and to show off what you have learnt in class.

    Alana C

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  7. Room 10June 6, 2012 at 7:20 PM

    Great blog post Damen! I liked how it was very desriptive and the photo looks really professional. This post says a lot about how Southland is such a beautiful reigon.

    Meg J

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